Yay for Gem and Gemma, being so creepy and so fun. I like your take on them! And the details, of course. There would be paperwork involved, and no matter how cute it was, the twins did "smile through their teeth and tell the highest military authority in Corinth to fuck off". I loved Dillon's exchanges with K, and Ziggy's salute (with a knife! eek!).

And, yay, Gemma's diary page, with the space-age unicorn! I love their drawings :) Which RPM characters have journals?